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If you like immature stories with an immature-sounding narrator, then this is the book for you. Examples of the immaturity are ending far, far too many sentences with a forcefully stated “baby,” calling sex parts “fun box” and “temple of delight. Included are boring tellings of sexual exploits, which defeat the point of buying this type of book. To be erotic, it takes more than reiterating the raw p word for a vagina and how big a penis is. then the author tried—very unsuccessfully—to add some BDSM aspects. I suggest that the author try to do less, so that maybe he/she can finally do something well. The narrator reads waaaaayyy too fast and reads incorrectly, with pauses or hesitations where they shouldn’t be, like she’s not sure what the next word is and, at the very least, not sure how to portray the statement. Bad! Finally, even with multiple partners, no one seems to be familiar with condoms. Yeah, we often listen to these stories as a form of escapism, but some degree of realism and just plain common sense is necessary for a book to be a good one. Yuk, bad, and immature.
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