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this story had me so horney I had to please myself j needed a griend. fun time
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I couldnt finish the book. Technically,too many repeated words and phrases like "pussy" and "All the right curves". Not enough use of metaphors or similes. The characterizations are uncompelling, lacking depth. The female narration is too brash, too hard. Needs dynamics.
The situations are too generic for the listener to be invested in. Id like to think that lesbians (first time or not) have a variety of looks and backgrounds. This might as well be two girls and one story. This book needed more time to develop.