Alton J Henley
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Great concept / Hated the prosletyzing
What would have made A Learning Experience, Book 1 better?
I wanted to love it I really did, the concept is awesome. But the endless prosletyzing was exhausting. Everytime I was getting into the story, I was pulled out of it about by the author talking about the MSM, the uslessness of the government, and the rapaciousness of lawyers. Topics I at least sympathize with him on, but MAKE IT INTEGRAL TO THE STORY. Just mentioning the character hated working in medicine because (insert political viewpoint here) is jarring.
Sorry about that.
What was most disappointing about Christopher G. Nuttall’s story?
43 of 50 people found this review helpful
Great Story, but OMG the reader
What did you like best about A Thirst for Vengeance? What did you like least?
I like the story I really do, but I can't finish it...
How could the performance have been better?
A different reader. Any other reader. A computer generated voice even. I just couldn't take it
2 of 3 people found this review helpful