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4 out of 5 stars
By Amazon CustomerBeliever on 03-03-17

A Nice Story

I was lost during parts of the book since I had not read the first two. This was billed as a stand alone book but if you don't have the background of the other two you will get lost. the flashbacks were not sufficient to help me understand some of the references. the book was well developed and I like how things twisted around each other. the narrator helped to bring the book to life. I will look for more books narrated by this one. I got this book via audiobook boom. I believe that as a continuation of a storyline it did the job well. Just wish I had read the other two before delving into this one.

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3 out of 5 stars
By MelHay on 04-05-17

Her story is entwined with the story of the land

How would you have changed the story to make it more enjoyable?

This is a hard one because of the nature of the story.

In listening to the beginning I feel like there is a disconnect with some information I don't have. Yet at the same time it made me curious to find that information and answers to questions that arise to what I'm learning. These pieces that I wasn't 100% sure of fit because of the style of the story. This was mostly in the parts with Payne's POV, there is a reason for this. She doesn't remember anything before she was in the ruin of a temple she stays at. Farine's sections are more informative and helps with some of the gaps, though a few more details we can connect to what Payne's seeing would have been nice.

What do you think the narrator could have done better?

Lisa is a new narrator for me. I had thought I had listened to one story with her voicing, but I hadn't. Is it possible to over enunciate? I felt some of the words were overly pronounced to make sure all comes across clear. Lisa's audio is clean and clear as you go through the story.

Any additional comments?

*I was voluntarily provided this review copy audiobook at no charge by the author, publisher and/or narrator.

The one thing I noticed at the beginning is the chapters were divided between two characters, Payne and Farine. In print it's easy to differentiate when it switches. In audio, it's a bit harder. This goes for all books.

I spent the book trying to put together a time frame in my mind. The time frame I was trying to work out, doesn't exist. I was trying to match the sections of Payne and Farine to each other. They don't fit in in the thinking I originally had. Then when I accepted that wasn't going to happen, I relaxed into the story. I came upon a section that was an ah-ha moment where I thought things would go a certain way, and it explained why I couldn't put the time frames together. (When you get there you'll understand too. I don't want to give it away as it feels like a big movement in the book.)

It all comes together in the end. I felt like so much was here! At the ending, last about two hours, I didn't want to do anything else but listen to all the information and details of how things worked out.

We do get the story of the war that broke the land. The magic that was used and why, is explained here. Very interesting.

The beginning can be confusing. There are pieces of the world that are mentioned but you don't know what they are, yet. If you hold out and let the story wash over you, taking it all in, you will get your answers and love the ending for it. It's difficult if you try to piece Payne and Farine's time frames together as though they are happening at the same time. They aren't.

I enjoy Frances's writings. I've read a few of her books. She has a way of leaving a feeling that answers the questions. This book feels as though it's missing information though, to give a better feel of the world, the pockets, and why it's broken by magic.

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