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By Kindle Customer on 01-09-17
The Narration was not good
The story itself, I found to be pretty good. I am a huge fan Alpha/Omega stories especially where there is Mpreg involved, but the narrator sounded like someone who just learned to read. The was character deferential, there wasn't even any kind inflection in his voice. Overall, I just really quite listening and pulled up the story and read it myself.
By Patrick Twain on 09-22-16
Story too short & empty to be on any market.
To offer 3 narrated books at these prices? 32 minutes of a poorly two to three word at a time presentation and call it narration was the second disappointment. And to call it a Story or a Book is an insult. Please, Mr. Bates, take these back and add the quality you are now capable of doing. And find a narrator that will read your work until it can be done at a professional level.
By Kindle Customer on 06-23-16
Narration distracted from the story
Would you try another book from Aiden Bates and/or Trevor Clinger?
From Aiden Bates yes, but not with the same narrator.
Has Omega: Fated to His Alpha Prince turned you off from other books in this genre?
No. I'm fan of mm paranormal stories
Would you be willing to try another one of Trevor Clinger’s performances?
No. The delivery was stiff, unenthusiastic and distracted from the story. His voice /delivery is a huge distraction.
What character would you cut from Omega: Fated to His Alpha Prince?
I can't answer this question. The stiff 1. 2, 3 break cadence that the narration was delivered distracted me from the story so much I honestly don't recall any of the short story.
Any additional comments?
Choose a narrator who will bring you words to life. The wrong narrator or delivery will ruin a good story, but will destroy a half way decent story.