Is there anything you would change about this book?
The story concept is ok but the telling of the story is bad. It is hard to get into the story and believe what is going on. There are a lot details missing that make you want to stop listening.
What could John B. Rosenman have done to make this a more enjoyable book for you?
Work on the scenes to make them believable.
Could you see Beyond Those Distant Stars being made into a movie or a TV series? Who should the stars be?